The chill can be
kind of cruel
for it generally
reminds me
of your
hug
even the sun
and its piercing rays
for I remember
these words
I speak:
“your sight”
the dust
on our center
table
marks where
your
palm
rests as you try to
reach my
lips
and the engine oil spill
on garage
and your gruesome hard work
and our puppy
for your daily poop
clean up
and the leaves hanging
from neighbor’s
Mango tree
your clatter collection
and never I forget
the house key
and your kisses on my
temple
every time I left
it inside the locked house
especially this
office carbon paper
and the poetry
I dedicated
to this love
(and the day dreaming)
these all reminds me
of this love
love which will
age
eternally
remembered
16th of June 2012
©2012 J.B.T.
I’m having problems with paragraph spacing, as you can see in this piece, each thought wasn’t separated by space for the reason I don’t really know. I was placing proper spacing as I write it but after clicking the Publish button, it turned out that way, continuous bunch of words.. I can’t achieve the proper pauses I intended to portray so kindly help me 😦
hey i too had same..so sometimes I opty to add images in between to space the paras. or else..give more spacing in the drafts..iearound 5-6 times more than usual..u will get it. 🙂
haha!I only tried 2 to 3 spacing hehe…thanks Soumya, hope it will be effective ehehe 🙂
Jymiely….You should compare this poems to ones from months ago…This poems hould be published…you were always good, but now….wow
thank you dear David, you know how I love that to happen, but I think I still need to maintain the consistency of writing before that demanding publishing stuff occur, you know how hard it is for me to write especially when poetic impulses are sleeping on my system…Someday, it will happen, hopefully.. hehe 🙂
Hi Jymiely, I just wanna let you know that you are one of my nominees because of the fact that your poetry is excellent!
http://sassyishellonheels.wordpress.com/2012/06/17/awards-night/
wooow, that is so much appreciated Sassy! Thank you and God bless you, will check it out in a while 🙂
Very nice I am impressed, my writing is coming out in fits and starts these days
Thank you Ian, will need to check my unread emails and check new posts, I’m sure I will certainly find yours 🙂
very interesting relationship Jam. your poems are truly amazing.
salty and sweet, sometimes bitter and sour, but it still taste amazing though, thank you dear 🙂
hmm quite unlike Jam, more like pickles of myriad taste 🙂
Ii like the look, and frame of your images, it is captured in precision and hoonesty~ Lovingly, Deb
thank you dear Deb, although I didn’t get the format that I intended to make, still happy that you liked my little love letters 🙂 all the hugs in the world sent to you-Jam 🙂
Wow !
Great Poem !
wow…really like the format, visuals and emotions evoked, keep up the great writing jymiely 🙂
thank you Roxie, much appreciated 🙂