Never thought of how much
I would die
as they said
until, the long time vexations
have already
manipulated,
inch by inch, it twitches
my mind
the longing of a peaceful
fortnight
suddenly, it died down
unnoticed:
I was ungratified by your
eternal silence,
whatever I do
whichever I choose;
it won’t last long
it won’t be noticed.
they say it act as
an affirmation,
I say, eyes tight,
I will speak with
a naïve mouth,
the curse of the latex qualms.
4th of June 2012
©2012 J.B.T.
the hymn of words that binds your mind and leaves you wanting for more !
this is crazy!your comment went on spammer’s folder!good thing I checked them 🙂 many thanks for your juicy thoughts! 🙂
I don’t wish to be known as the “king of spam” 😉
plz…keep checking there though !!!
Very nice, really like the ending
result from a tattered health vacation, many thanks sir 🙂
Blood and sinew in every line! Fabulous writing doll! Thanks dear for your talent tank-heart! ~Deb
ahh,I’m overflooded with wordy blessings, so much to thank from you Deb, love you my friend 🙂
Keep shining your light. I always enjoy your poetry and it always speaks to me. :)This is why I nominated you for the Sunshine Blogger Award: http://maribelskidneystory.wordpress.com/2012/06/07/sunshine-blogger-award/
wow, thank you dear Maribel…I’m so glad that my pieces are fulfilling its purpose, and thank you for your nomination I really appreciate it! I’ll visit the link as soon as I can dear, thanks again 🙂
very interesting Jymie. 🙂
I love the twillight saga movies, especially bella and edward’s love.
haha!noticed the first line? 🙂 am an avid fan myself! Thank you dear 🙂
i never thought i will love a sweet, teenage romance before watching that saga. 🙂
haha,never the blood-sucking creatures ok, you’ll be safe 🙂
blood sucking creatures 🙂
actually the sweetness of the story wipes out that part almost out of mind. doesnot it?
you bet it is,haha!!!
🙂
sorry i forgot to add jake.