…some stupid bitterness. Please allow me
__________
you stained my heart
just as my lipstick did to itself
how could you stone me
without gravels and pebbles?
I noticed: your words are!
your words are the boulders
which destroyed this diamond vitality.
never been too literal before.
every word was born as similes and metaphors:
there you go, fiery surge of unfervorness
then I claimed curses, it’s not yours
i owned them, dearly tis for you
never been too literal before.
thin string between love and
Hate
exists: you’ll cut it?
no, I’ll do it
with my finger scissors
then fire unto me
your rights and
I’ll canon the wrongs
and the frights
never been too literal before.
yes, this will be it:
graphically speaking, will
you bow down?
will you eat your words
as I drink my tears?
your whisper shouts
your every feat.
and I can’t help but to fit
my bridal gown
yes, of course in my mind
you bastard!
I love you and I love
your fear.
keep me, I love myself
and I’ll be literal about it.
27th of April 2012
©2012, J.B.T.

One can feel the pain in this – love it being literal in the final two lines – bravo!
thanks Polly, too much pain it is…how it devours our system sometimes
Write it out – it helps
I’ve written a lot of bitter poems, so you are allowed
haha thank you
I loved reading this, completely different to the work I do and so much better I must say! Great work once again
yeah its a lot different from most of mine too so thank you if you enjoyed this bitterness
I really enjoyed it!
Good luck in the poetry challenge by the way!
oh, why thank you!
being nominated is much appreciated, winning is like only icing the cake
Jymiely your very passionate. Thanks for sharing Nonoy Manga
Thank you for seeing that in me, and your welcome
I love the literal and metaphorical mixing in a bitter soup…truly amazing Jymiely
sometimes sipping a bitter soup would help mend a broken heart
haha i get the idea from your comment my friend
really?? hehhehe
yep hehe, you’re much smarter than i am
cheers
We are both smart:)))))
if you say so haha! we’re lifting each others chairs, lol
yes!!!! lol
Wonderfully done!
out of bitterness, thank you
what a war with oneself and someone she so loves. hope she wins at the end!
yeah, I won! oopsie, you got the subject lol