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Oh! how will the quill produce its children
came close, fertility had been short-lived;
must I turn to notes of noble Herren?
must gawk on pugnacious life, things by-lived?
Which excuse will he impose thy kind bearer?
his table cloth’s cinders been objecting,
infinite time of Time cared for a thing;
not of my own: my life’s entertainer.
Platterful raindrops eloquently pour,
hands pasted on pastel wall; sensual cringe;
how can these lips kiss if mine you devour?
monstrous power of quill, finite: constringe.
The first query inquired, last I answered:
Thoughts of my love, kisses I pondered.
30th of April, 2012
©2012, J.B.T.
How can these lips kiss if mine you devour….how sensual and romantic….devour….I love this Jymiely:)
i was inspired by Bruno Mars’ It Will Rain MTV, where the girl bit Bruno’s lip..that was a very sensual act hehe
very interesting jymie
when i hear the name bruno popeye’s rival pops up in my mind.
haha lol, well he was popular before the bruno mars today
check him out i looved that song, the meaning is so great 
okay i will check it out but still….
hey corrections- pop eye’s rival is bluto not bruno ha ha
haha,.lol, it doesn’t matter they sounds the same haha!
What a great opening line
thank you glad you liked it
Love this:
“Platterful raindrops eloquently pour,
hands pasted on pastel wall; sensual cringe;
how can these lips kiss if mine you devour?
monstrous power of quill, finite: constringe.”
Excellent flow jymiley! Very thrilled to have found your work! RL
gee, i’m blushing right now!!glad you enjoyed… thank david, that’s where I saw you, and I thought our souls will jive because were both curly haired so there
haha that’s more i like it, UNITED IN CURLS hehe..cheers!:)
Gentle and profusely beautiful in sound & depictions ~wonderful my sweet gal.
Beautiful poem and the watercolor sets it off…you are a good poet and do not let anyone tell you otherwise!
thank you, Thank God I haven’t heard from my detractors…if such exists, they haven’t introduce their selves yet
.. your encouragement is soo much apppreciated!
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thank you so much!