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Jittery

Yanks

Me over.

I

Envy

Laid back

Yip-pies.

 

 

18th April 2012

©2012, J.B. Tamayo

 

 

…just to perk up my busy day! ;)

 


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8 thoughts on “Acrostic for a Busy Day

  1. J.B. Awesome! You got to it a lot sooner than I thought… Great job. The only suggestion I would make is to bold each first letter of the acrostic word so that it stands out and maybe put the word as the title. There’s still more to play with when you have time such as making the acrostic have only one word per letter or a complete sentence per letter.I hope you found it fun! Great job!!!

    I’m still waiting for a challenge for me to do off your poetry list :)

    Peace,

    Stephen

    • Its my name actually ;) yeah i really wanted to remove that OVER and BACK because they played as second words, but anyway, its my first time so please forgive me haha ;) i made that acrostic because i was so busy yesterday, I don’t have available time to write more so, tadaa! thank you stephen, your critics are well-accepted ! ;)

      • Jymiely,
        I’ve wondered. I’ve been able to place J.B. from your about page and thought the J might stand for Jymiely. Is that your first name? I wasn’t sure so that’s why I’ve been putting J.B.
        Anyway, I thought what you wrote was great and only made the suggestions of bolding the first letter as it makes the word or sentence you’re using stand out. I’ve written acrostics using sentences off the first letter so I wasn’t saying that as a negative to this acrostic, I was just trying to suggest other challenges to try if you continue to explore acrostics.

        I look forward to your next poem :)

        Stephen

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